Okay.
So in my spare time i like writing and this is something i just finished.
I just what to know what people think and if they have any constructive critisism. So pleaseee read it and just tell me what you think.

the story is kind of based on the tv programme "dirty sexy money"
in that it revolves around a rich family in New York with lots of secrets.

The funny thing about lies and secrets is that they don’t come alone. The same way fishes come in schools and birds come in flocks, lies come all together too. And like a domino effect, once one is revealed the rest soon follow suit.
Secrets have a way of pulling out sides of people that you never knew they had, only after secrets have been revealed and everything is laid out on the table can you clearly see a person for who and what they are. Of course, once the news is out not everything goes happily ever after. Lies and secrets have the power to completely ruin how a person is perceived, looked at and therefore treated. Everything can change. For better… or worse.
In this instance, a mixture of the two.

This case in particular, is a perfect example of all that and it centers around the Francis family.
One of the oldest, richest, most prestigious and talked about families in the history of New York. The Franis empire has been around since the early nineteen hundreds and even back then, people were infatuated with the family. Now, Marcus Francis owns the business and remains the owner of the Francis Company, who own chains of 5 star hotels around the world.
But their business is hardly what kept the Francis’ in the news; it was rather their image. The image of perfection, coveted by everyone.
No one could find fault in the Francis family, Marcus was friendly and highly like able, Monica – his wife – was beautiful and elegant and their marriage seemed to be spotless. Their three children, Presley, Monroe and Bridgette, (named after sex symbols of the 60s) were all painfully gorgeous and highly educated.

On seeing the Francis Family, perhaps on the news as they casually are or as their limo drives by, maybe as your pass one of the hotel…. Your first image is of them sitting in luxurious clothes, huddled together with inviting smiles on their faces and champagne flutes in hands as you typically have on the cover of several magazines. And when you see them, your compelled to pick up the magazine and read the centerfold on the prestigious family. Weather or not you hate them. Most people in the city grew sick of seeing the Francis family plastered all over the place a long time ago, yet still find themselves succumbing to reading their articles or daydreaming about living a day in their lives.
Who can blame them? For these photo shoots and billboards are enough to capture anyone’s eye and make them gaze up in awe no matter how many times they’ve gawked at it.
However, I can guarantee you that the revelation of 4 of the Francis biggest secrets will have you never again envying their lives or staring wishfully at their pictures.

What do you think?

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